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Jan Haag's avatar

Gorgeous specifics that so capture the nature of a particular kind of grief. And oh, how this poem lands so nicely: "I can't lie: I don't want to outlive you..." Yesyesyes... having outlived a husband and sailing that resuscitated car... I know that well!

SWWIM Every Day's avatar

Oh so sorry to hear that... yes, there are so many truths here.

Maura's avatar

This is so beautiful. Just as I tire of poems about loss (can I bear to read another?), in comes this, so spare and telling in its details. Thank you.

SWWIM Every Day's avatar

We hear you! There are only so many subjects, it seems. And then a new take comes in and blows us away with its poignancy.

LL's avatar

so good. thank you.