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Sep 12, 2023Liked by SWWIM Every Day

Gorgeous specifics that so capture the nature of a particular kind of grief. And oh, how this poem lands so nicely: "I can't lie: I don't want to outlive you..." Yesyesyes... having outlived a husband and sailing that resuscitated car... I know that well!

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Oh so sorry to hear that... yes, there are so many truths here.

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Sep 8, 2023Liked by SWWIM Every Day

This is so beautiful. Just as I tire of poems about loss (can I bear to read another?), in comes this, so spare and telling in its details. Thank you.

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We hear you! There are only so many subjects, it seems. And then a new take comes in and blows us away with its poignancy.

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so good. thank you.

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