By Annie Schumacher
Wow. I read this one twice. Both times the last line got me!
This poem cuts deep. The repetition of "blue" in the audio is so striking. That last image will haunt me. 💙
I know. I want to make this a prompt: "Empty as...." how many similes does it take to get to something as fresh as "empty as the inside of a wrist." ?
Great idea!
I've already been thinking about this and revising some old rough drafts appropriately : )
Wow. I read this one twice. Both times the last line got me!
This poem cuts deep. The repetition of "blue" in the audio is so striking. That last image will haunt me. 💙
I know. I want to make this a prompt: "Empty as...." how many similes does it take to get to something as fresh as "empty as the inside of a wrist." ?
Great idea!
I've already been thinking about this and revising some old rough drafts appropriately : )