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Kim Nelson's avatar

"Three of our mothers lost in as many months…” A brilliant emotional pivot in the midst of a deliciously gustatory, ideally brief piece.

Tresha Faye Haefner's avatar

I know. I am trying to make my poems as concise and precise as this one.

Angela Just's avatar

Just wow … gonna look for more by this poet.

Annis Cassells's avatar

"We are the bees."

Tresha Faye Haefner's avatar

"We are the bees." I was really not expecting that final line. Wow!

Sandy Seeber-Quayle's avatar

Brilliant!