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Lindsay Rockwell's avatar

I love the repetition too! and how it builds on the same scaffold though that scaffold yields a different turn each time. thank you, Adela!

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Lisa Zimmerman's avatar

I love the repetition in this poem, also:

"and leaves stuck wet

like a sentence that has too many

participles and lacks

concrete nouns."

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