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Nancy's avatar

wow what a poem, from the first line on. line breaks do a lot for this too. spare and melancholy, then the clouds, all dissolves....

Luis A. Estable's avatar

The language of the poem is appropriate for the situation of bones. You have a few lines that gave me a pause for they are well-written poetically and otherwise.

I read this poem with pleasure.

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