By Phyllis Klein
wow what a poem, from the first line on. line breaks do a lot for this too. spare and melancholy, then the clouds, all dissolves....
The language of the poem is appropriate for the situation of bones. You have a few lines that gave me a pause for they are well-written poetically and otherwise.
I read this poem with pleasure.
It’s so hard to say goodbye… or just to see yourself change.
wow what a poem, from the first line on. line breaks do a lot for this too. spare and melancholy, then the clouds, all dissolves....
The language of the poem is appropriate for the situation of bones. You have a few lines that gave me a pause for they are well-written poetically and otherwise.
I read this poem with pleasure.
It’s so hard to say goodbye… or just to see yourself change.