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The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

Lovely!!!

SWWIM Every Day's avatar

Thank you for reading! We're so glad you enjoyed it.

Maureen Doallas's avatar

This poem beautifully transitions to its (unexpected) conclusion. Gorgeous.

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Thank you, Maureen!

Annie Stenzel's avatar

oh, Jennifer! how marvelous is this one -- brava! 🙏🏽

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Thanks for reading, Annie!

Dana Kinsey's avatar

This is one of those rare poems that will stay with me. I love it. ❤️

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Thank you, Dana!