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LaDonna Witmer's avatar

Oof. Right in the solar plexus--in the best sort of way. This line, especially:

"Sweetheart? Wake up. Your mouth is full of teeth."

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

What a take this is! No flattery in this. it is raw and perhaps justified. I see where all this is coming from. Any woman would see what I see in all of this and more with more precision.

Good read!

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Amanda Karch's avatar

oh love everything about this

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