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Laura Van Prooyen's avatar

Those faces in the yolks surprised me in the best way. So many images here that will stick with me.

SWWIM Every Day's avatar

What a great comment! Thanks so much for reading.

Suzanne Edison's avatar

ringless finger starts this poem and we end on broods. such a surprise—dredging things out of their lairs.

SWWIM Every Day's avatar

The best parts of poems--the surprises!